Lt. Dan Story: Possible Changes

I have concluded that I should use one of two ideas for alterations to my Lt. Dan story. First possibility, add a past tense segment that has flashbacks to Vietnam with a similar story line. Second possibility, focus on the high rate of mortality among platoon commanders. The extremely high death rate relative to other ranks was caused by friendly fire, and inadequate training in the field, despite, being the primary enemy targets in the average fire fight.