Must be said...

When I wrote the Lt. Dan piece I tried a completely different style of writing. In some places it just does not sound right and it must be adjusted. I would like to do that now but I would rather get some feedback before I cut the piece up. I also have more info that Dan Clifford gave me; I have additional info that can be put in to substitute unwanted sections. I will only take out sections though if it becomes apprtent that I need to speed the piece up after I change some of the conjugations.